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I sure as hell don't have that much effect on the battlefield, though with the Weapon that may change.

Anyway, yeah, one dollar. I really don't even. I mean, if it was a bunch of really, really short books, like a few hundred pages long in total... But no, it's ~2900 digital pages of Eldritch awesome. This will take some time.

Link to fanfic?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JkXyS_K6gzdz3t_yjFa9zyMJhheC2K9UjM7q7g5SQkw/edit?usp=sharing

There.

Okay, @fseftr: The fanfic is pretty good, the only possible things I could legitimately complain about at this point is that the sections are too short, but that's only a problem if it ends up beyond a certain length. Short stories work fine with shorts cropped sections like that, but novel-length stories tend not to do so well with so many breaks. Its good for now though.
I could potentially question lots of other things like character inclusion and stuff like that, but that stuff is a matter of artistic choice, so far, you're good to go, its pretty interesting.

Same with your Blue plot. That's been pretty interesting to watch, your character gradually getting more and more characterization explaining her actions until where we are now.

@maniac: No no, its not about wording things correctly, and you are good at describing things, you just have a problem with putting your plot twists together properly, most of them have been a case where you came pretty darn close to getting a really good one and it didn't quite come out properly. You're a very good writer, and writing excuses would probably be a good podcast for all of us to listen to if we get time.
I am eagerly anticipating your last plot twist.
And it wasn't that your story didn't make sense, its that it tended to jump, and a lot of the events seemed more self-contained or self-justifying than they were connected with the rest, although I suppose I should wait for Oblivion before I make any more remarks about that

Well. For the sake of making it interesting, I tried to only add characters with distinctive personalities and that are somewhat relevant. There really aren't too too many of those.
I've always had trouble with chapter length, even with longer projects. I guess I just... enjoy splitting stuff up into small parts.

Yeah, Blue has a very... complicated personality. Mostly because she's a therapist's nightmare, to say the least. Which in turn is mostly because backstory.

Speaking of which, Twin, do I have a week to tell the story of Blue's father's death, before whatever's about to happen happens?

If I were to guess, Oblivion would be summoned either by True Maniac, upon his death, or will turn out to be him all along. Unless, of course, True Maniac is merely an illusion! This might be a breakthrough!

To answer your question fseftr, no, you do not have a week until the next big event. trust me.

Shame. I should probably chill out on the drama and angst for a bit though. Time for something a little more light-hearted.

Hmm...

You could work on it during this upcoming event.
Entirely up to you though.

But yeah, we seem to have been having a lot of story telling going on lately.

H3h.

That reminds me... I need to get to work on Act 3.

Quick question: Are alchemy ingredients consumed in making a new Alchemy (IE, I no longer have my Severed Left Hand because it was used in making The Iron Fist)?

Pretty sure. You can, however, copy the items for free before doing so.

No actually, they aren't. Unless something else screwy happens, you keep the original item. Remember, I never re-alchemized uranium's umbrage, and I used that in the Big Chill.

You just posted right after i saw your first appearance on DTG II.

Unrelated, but i think this means something.

Right?

Twin, if it's not to late to make picture requests, can you draw the cloaked man wielding Sunspot?

Leon, the editor removed my responce. You entered the paiming with The Painter. The current year was 1000 ADC(After Dungeon Construction). You arrived at 413 ADC by going into the painting. You found the Past Painter, who did not notice you. In the present, there were 999 paintings of diffrent times hanging. In 413 ADC, there are 412. You arrived in The Past Canvas, which is in even better condition than the present. There is a door leading to The Past Crossroads. Note: The Past Painter will not notice you, so don't even try.

K, got it.


You know... now that you said that PTP won't notice me. It is EXTREMELY tempting to try...

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Quick question: Are alchemy ingredients consumed in making a new Alchemy (IE, I no longer have my Severed Left Hand because it was used in making The Iron Fist)?

No, they're not.

Ok, thanks for that info, Twin. Now I know I don't lose the use of my left hand whenever I want to do stuff with The Iron Fist and it's successors. Because, you know, having a left hand is important.

I just recently read the part where Build killed Split and Scratch killed Build, courtesy of the link in Ideal's signature. All I have to say is, 'Whoa!'